Higher: Othello

Well done in your Timed Critical Evaluations! I hope the feedback that you have received so far, particularly the focus on timed PEAR paragraphs, has helped. One wee thing (that was, like, dead frustrating) was your use of the phrase 'bring him down,' as in: 'Iago was determined to bring him down.' Here's the result of the pair-task to think of alternative (more literary) phrases:

diminish his reputation

bring about his demise

tarnish his good name

usurp his authority

ruined his reputation

end his euphoria (?)

usurp his power

continue his vendetta against him

cloud his nature in the eyes of others

downgrade him from his position of power

lessen him in Othello's eyes

destroy his career / reputation

emotionally cripple him

bring about his downfall